The kick maybe needs more attack/presence. The snare is sitting in there well, but the kick is a little off in the mix. Maybe try to get rid of some low mids in the lower backing vocals. I like the special effects you used on guitars and the longer effects on the vocals. Maybe try to get these longer delays a little more in time (seems like they are off beat sometimes). Also maybe try to get them dirtier -> for example saturation on the delay itself, but other ideas are welcome.
OK... all done except the delays.. I searched but I don't perceive the delays out of time, can you please point out in time where they seem that way to you?
added: saturation on delay suggestion... you were thinking about it being applied more in the breakdown part?