Hi @Arelem! I like your track, the analog-y synths sit together very well, the sounds are complementary, melodic and create atmosphere. I like the deep bass that gives the track some oomf !
Some thoughts / ideas
- What if you upped the tempo a bit overall, would it create a bit more drive ?
- The drums sound quite up front and bright I'm wondering if taming the top frequencies and adding a ducked large space reverb would push them back slightly into the mix (note, could be personal taste, I tend to do heavily filtered drums, and I tend to use synth drums a lot)
- For the transition at 2:40, maybe add a drum intro into the main drum rhythm, or alternatively, create a more marked 'drop' to create anticipation
Great stuff !