Hi all,
I'll give feedback to the final 3 entries, not for any good reason, it's effectively selecting 3 at random.
@knob_Houdini
I find the delay on the verse vox a bit too crazy for my tastes, maybe just turn the feedback down. It's also a bit long lasting for the chorus, I find it hard to listen to other aspects of the music because I'm so distracted following all those delays

That said, I think you have a very decent balance. On chorus 2 I think that electric guitar can come down a touch. On the middle section I think the vox is jumping out too much vs the volume of the track. I like what you've done and I think it could definitely work like this with some more tweaks.
@Mork
Solid work. Love the verse. Coming into the chorus, the lead vocal level seems to drop, it also sounds a bit too different to the vocal sound we have just been listening to. I'm not sure what is causing this, but I would guess that you've separated the verse vox to a separate track and processed it differently. There's nothing wrong with doing that, but check it is consistent. The middle section is fine. I think your last chorus is cool, it's the hardest section to do well and I think yours works.
@JeroenZuiderwijk
Sounds cool to me! I like your use of saturation. On the chorus, it's interesting how it becomes more airy a texture with a prominent synth. I like the way it is, but just careful that it doesn't sound like a step down when it hits the chorus. Middle section works well. Last section also fine.
Cheers all