Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC081 May 2024 - Submissions until 24-MAY-2024 23:59 UTC+2/CEST
Posted: Sun May 12, 2024 17:54 CEST
@Arelem What you have produced sounds excellent with some powerful bass and drums driving the track. Your use of the stereo field and 'front to back' depth in the mix is excellent.
It does sound like you are going for a more minimalistic feel but for me it could do with just one more layer of sound here and there to enhance it further. I only say that because as I'm listening to it I want to break out my synth and riff along with it!! I really wouldn't change anything that you have already done, I would just add in a little bit more.
At 0:40 we do get the introduction of an additional element but I was anticipating more of a full blown pad sound or a lead melody riff to appear. Likewise at 1:30 where we get a repeat of the previous section I was expecting a new sound to be introduced running up to the break at 1:51. At 2:22 I would capitalize on the additional layer that you do introduce by also bringing back in the lead riff from earlier or even throwing caution to the wind and throw in a host of new elements building up to the finish.
Having said all that please be aware that this advice is coming from someone whose tracks invariably end up sounding like an 80s synthfest so feel free to ignore me if I have misinterpreted the feel you were going for!
PS your 'wiring' screenshot is not visible to me for some reason
It does sound like you are going for a more minimalistic feel but for me it could do with just one more layer of sound here and there to enhance it further. I only say that because as I'm listening to it I want to break out my synth and riff along with it!! I really wouldn't change anything that you have already done, I would just add in a little bit more.
At 0:40 we do get the introduction of an additional element but I was anticipating more of a full blown pad sound or a lead melody riff to appear. Likewise at 1:30 where we get a repeat of the previous section I was expecting a new sound to be introduced running up to the break at 1:51. At 2:22 I would capitalize on the additional layer that you do introduce by also bringing back in the lead riff from earlier or even throwing caution to the wind and throw in a host of new elements building up to the finish.
Having said all that please be aware that this advice is coming from someone whose tracks invariably end up sounding like an 80s synthfest so feel free to ignore me if I have misinterpreted the feel you were going for!
PS your 'wiring' screenshot is not visible to me for some reason