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Re: MIX CHALLENGE - MC069 September 2020 - Mix Round 2 until 14-OCT-2020 23:59 UTC+2/CEST
Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2020 13:42 CEST
by rvalle
Hello my friends!
Here is my version for round 2.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1YLUXNi ... sp=sharing
I made some changes looking for an improvement in the musicality and the feeling of energy progression in the music. I hope I managed to deliver that.
I improved the kick equalization. I also relocated the simulated kick element in the first part of the song. I tried to improve the volume on the vocals, mainly in the less intensity regions, regulating the amount of ambience effect in these parts and added a second delay effect, with feedback. I adjusted the volume of some percussive elements in the final part, looking for an increase in strength and presence.
Thank you, Joshua, for his contribution to the community. It was a good challenge and learning to have worked with several layers of percussive elements, mainly in the search for a balance between them and with the rest of the elements of the music. It is!
Re: MIX CHALLENGE - MC069 September 2020 - Mix Round 2 until 14-OCT-2020 23:59 UTC+2/CEST
Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2020 16:58 CEST
by Olli H
Hi,
I’m proud to be on round 2!
Some changes made:
- Vox: Some cut to low-midrange.
- ”Fake Guitar:” moved more to background
- Paranoid-part: more automation, more attitude to percussion, less vocal delay.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1AHUzQx ... sp=sharing
Statistics by Youlean:
MC069_FellFromTheTree_Control_OlliH_R2.wav
Momentary Max = -10.09 LUFS
Short Term Max = -12.20 LUFS
Integrated = -16.08 LUFS
Re: MIX CHALLENGE - MC069 September 2020 - Mix Round 2 until 14-OCT-2020 23:59 UTC+2/CEST
Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2020 21:10 CEST
by Mellow Browne
Hey there, hey Joshua
here is my mix for round 2:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/17baTud ... sp=sharing
-A few compressor setting adjustments to tighten things up
-Some EQ adjustments on synth and guitar bus to create more space for the vocals
-Some EQ adjustments on the delay and reverb to create even more space for the vocals
-Some automation adjustments
I also deleted the auto pan you did not like @ 01:31. I didn't change anything else, I only focused on the things from your feedback.
Link to project folder:
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/ ... sp=sharing
Cheers!
Re: MIX CHALLENGE - MC069 September 2020 - Mix Round 2 until 14-OCT-2020 23:59 UTC+2/CEST
Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2020 22:04 CEST
by DeifDiamond
Hi, how's it going?
It is the first time that I participate in this contest, could you make a brief criticism about my mix in order to improve my songs?
Thanks for your time.
Re: MIX CHALLENGE - MC069 September 2020 - Mix Round 2 until 14-OCT-2020 23:59 UTC+2/CEST
Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2020 03:03 CEST
by Mister Fox
A friendly reminder:
We're in the final 24 hours to submit your edit for Mix Round 2.
Re: MIX CHALLENGE - MC069 September 2020 - Mix Round 2 until 14-OCT-2020 23:59 UTC+2/CEST
Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2020 08:06 CEST
by Optoslam
Thank you Joshua for the feedback! Here's the updated version with requested slight tonal changes. Sub is now a bit louder as well as tiny boost on the high frequencies.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1p1PCxI ... sp=sharing
Re: MIX CHALLENGE - MC069 September 2020 - Mix Round 2 until 14-OCT-2020 23:59 UTC+2/CEST
Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2020 12:40 CEST
by tobinth
Hi!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1rUx7-X ... sp=sharing
Thanks for the feedback. Here is the latest version of my mix.
I didn't do a lot of changes, but only edited some details. For example, I tried adding a little bit of punch boosting the parallel drum bus and increasing attack time a little bit. Also checked some balances. I haven't done more tuning in the vocals, since I like the intimacy (and frankly, I did not have the time the last few days for big changes).
Hope you like it. Enjoy.
All the best,
Tobias
Re: MIX CHALLENGE - MC069 September 2020 - Mix Round 2 until 14-OCT-2020 23:59 UTC+2/CEST
Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2020 16:08 CEST
by Green-Dog
Hey,
here is my version for the round two:
Mix
I made some minor corrections based on Joshua comments.
Good luck to everyone!
Andrejs
Re: MIX CHALLENGE - MC069 September 2020 - Mix Round 2 until 14-OCT-2020 23:59 UTC+2/CEST
Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2020 17:32 CEST
by GenBassman
Good day.
Since I'm not really into that kind of music genre it was really hard to figure out what kind of disappointment was at the end of the song. I apologize if I'm not feeling this particular song the way Joshua did. So my work on R2 was just lowing midi slap bass and pushing up percussion with organs.
It's important to say that I can do some really nice things that can give this song new "wows" in some critical parts but this gonna be rearrangement and due to the rules I can't do that.
So this is the R2 mix:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1emIRk6 ... sp=sharing
I had some tech problems so I didn't proceed with any LUFS check, sorry about that.
I understand that every mix judgment is subjective but at least I give it a try. Greetings, from Russia with love.
Re: MIX CHALLENGE - MC069 September 2020 - Mix Round 2 until 14-OCT-2020 23:59 UTC+2/CEST
Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2020 17:36 CEST
by Square
Hiya
I made the requested edits and after bringing up the percussion in the ending, i thought the percussion in the rest of the track could use a little bit more attack to keep the relative balance between the two sections, this allowed me to add a tiny bit of warmth to the bass, having the overall effect that the edges of the vocal sound have been softenned. All of this benifits the overall sound in my opinion, and is relatively subtle.
Cheers,
Square
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_vZIoy ... sp=sharing