hello @patrlord and everyone,
sorry that I could not do this project, I want to complete my abilities in a different area, and I have no talent to produce reasonable electronica stuff.
but I hope it is appropriate and useful, to give a survey about what and how this one looks to me.
-- at first, we have a composer with detailed ideas, and technically it seems a very instructive challenge to the participants, in how to treat these rather raw tracks, to make something palpatable of it. and we have many remarks on these details, this is really great.
but also, for me some general questions and views seem very important and there may be interest to discuss, perhaps then it should continue in the "philosophic" threads that are general to production and music business.
here in the thread, I will try to relate the remarks to the project.
there is no such thing like telepathy, no one really knows what is not told (perhaps it is so in a loving couple..)
but there may be strong resonance, after the fact of a very good creation.
-- one big question is about self-awareness, to learn more about how the composer sees himself in all relevant contexts.
how do we get from some idea and melody to the paying audience? in short, we can look at a metaphorical layout like this:
- the composer is the deity, and creates a universe of ideas, ideals, emotions, dynamics and moves.
- but then we need the high priest - producer, mixer, singer, journalists - to complete the whole thing and give it a human interpretation for "normal" people to understand and like it. it is the concrete packaging, and paving ways for how to talk about it. also this is its own role because of the huge work to do.
- then, there will be some form of the choir
- and the normal audience
-- and in this picture I have the urgent question:
what is it? anu ba?? nandeska???
I want to see your self-awareness as an artist within culture and civilization.
(question sounds too big but when an answer exists, it will be a quite simple and easy one.)
then I can try to support and enhance a project.
-- one important context is "industry" - to know how many hundred million people are
familiar with certain sounds, to see how you get pulled into a certain direction immediately when you use these sounds, and it may happen after you reach over 10.000 plays on social media, and they begin to talk about it.
does it resemble
Real McCoy - Another Night
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pav2f4b-1ZE ??
please excuse the cheesiness but you are using practically the same sounds with less density and less clear intention in the arrangement, aside from the choice and directing of vocal performance,
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the vocal makes me wonder, what is the purpose?
and of course, the bass is massive and has to be!
so, you may not have composed such a thing, but aside from the vocals, I believe you have recorded such a thing.
it is no wonder, that the mixers did, what they did.
- the singer in the McCoy example is the "filipina" type (for reasons of popular singing culture, this has become absolutely a thing in eurobeat and eurodance, which have a huge niche on YT still today with new compilations),
and you could hire such a voice for a couple hundred bucks and she will lay down a hit, given everything else is right. (beware the posers)
we could mention a lot of electronic bands
Voyage voyage
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sM2ZhByFcDk
then, there are the Pet Shop Boys and Alphaville (for a male voice and such melody),
or, Depeche Mode
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-_3dc6X-Iwo (this live show should make clear the whole vibe that has to be created)
and all these also because of the type of melody!
and where does this music lead at all?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KW1NbZo-ruo I am wondering, what has really moved??
in younger productions, the beats have somewhat different feel, and most vocals have become entirely computerized.
the modern way is of course Billie
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EgBJmlPo8Xw
--- so, if it is not this, then...
one guy did something very different, but has anyone noticed it?
- it is franz,
please everyone listen again.
then a few others took it up, more or perhaps less consciously.
what do I mean?
franz took the whole thing, and instinctively saw it as a Musical,
he created two layers: the stage with the singer, and the background music.
and given the vocals, to me this is the only interpretation of the big -"what is it?"- that actually could work at all.
and it sounds like a live musical in a TV production, the modern, cost-oriented production without an orchestra.
this is happening. it has the drama. this is actually doing SOMETHING !!
it might be an "alphaville" hommage musical (look how there is a "Falco" musical), it may be not perfect, but it has a wholeness, it is a credible performance. proximity effect of the mic was left in, and will increase the "live" impression. same for the reverbs that include the snare. the very loud instrumental finale is legit too, because the singer has delivered his message, and the audience now has time to think about it and feel its emotions, before applause is allowed to start.
the singer seems to come from this culture:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EGb4hj-EXt0 of course there are electronic versions that save the cost of an orchestra.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lr8z-yyGqF8
as another example in this direction,
I think that @Matik did also a great projection of the personality of the singer and of the composer.
I agree that the @Photonic mix sounds great, it might be the BlueRay soundtrack for the musical, but also a single release after the fact.
TL;DR
I believe it is entirely legit and the right thing to do, to give the singer and his way of expression absolute priority.
when the singer sounds "Musical", it IS Musical.
point is, art and music have to tell a story, and the whole process around it makes the story even bigger.
anyone of you can tell a very different or opposing story as well. audiences and ratings will decide...