I had restrained a bit the stereo range of the lead synth to make it more mono compatible, finally I undid that for its frequencies higher than 500 Hz, so it feels pretty wide now. I also panned the " I tried" parts a bit more to the side (20L, 20R)Mix feels a bit narrow, it should feel wider and more open.
To give that overall wide feeling I applied a bit of pseudo stereo to the whole instrumental melodic group, for frequencies above 300 Hz
I pulled up the track 54 Instrument - A (31) by 2 dBThe low end could be more prominent around 0:28.
Nice, thank you!Transition at 0:42 is well blended.
I changed the volume automation of the lead synth so that it goes up quicker and thus doesn't fall apart just before the changeThe transition at 1:37 falls apart a little bit right in the last ½ bar before the change, its close just not quite right.
I added a transient designer and raised the volume by 1 more dBDrums need to hit a bit harder after 1:37 and again after 3:50.
I raised it by 2dB. I hope it's ok like that, I didn't like it much louderSynth lead part that starts at about 1:53 is to quiet by the time that part gets to around 1:58-2:02 is needs to be prominent enough to have a soaring feeling.
Added a delay to both the harmonic and the "I try" voicesVocals in the section after 2:26 feel a bit dry.