My own goal was to make the whole thing very organic, and accessible to a wider audience, but maybe quite older than millennials.
The listener should feel desire to crank it up and want to get drowned in a warm and wide sound scape of waves, and get carried away by dramatic vocals.
The great thing the drummer did, was help creating these slow waves thoughout the song.
I'm not following any style guidelines, but still use some known sounds that have worked over long times in music history.
Technically, it does not sound that much "rock", the sound is rather RnB-friendly on one side, and psychedelic vintage on the other side.
But I think it rocks quite a lot anyway, by virtue of its musical content, that I wanted to bring out more.
The string noise cancellation is a real game-changer.
I gave priority to uniqueness before "normalty" and industry sound standards.
I really stand for it, and did what I wanted to do with it, and am humbly happy it could be achieved so far..
So I hope that Chris might like it, too, and beg for an open heart while listening..
Don't judge the mp3, it eats up a lot of fine-structure. A modern format like a good Spotify upload sounds a lot better than that.
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I will try to comment on a number of mixes, as I have some spare time, and perhaps there is some return to learn from.
Please, take into account that everything is meant respectfully, but English is not my native language, and I must keep it short enough.
It is opinion only, and to be not boring, with some options about adjustments or little changes.
Great work was done here, with a quite peculiar set of mixtracks.
When I say or don't say something sounds professional, this is not a judgement about the engineer or studio, as every project might come out very different, and has very different input in the quality of the recording.
It is more about the concrete relationship here, between input and output in the particular project.
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JorgeAFerro
I like the intro but the full sound might jump in stronger, with a bit more low end. Intro guitar sounds full already, so I miss the boost.
Beautiful "reverse" effects to lead in song parts. Nice reverb work with vocals.
In the finale, a sentence from the verse was copied in, quite interesting idea. Let's see if the client accepts it, because creativity was clearly encouraged.
The high falsetto parts might come across a bit dominant and plain, esp. in the finale. At 1:10, I like the effects, in the finae I don't.
Kick is a bit soft. But OTOH rhythmic problems are mitigated.
Low end seems a bit thin here but probably can be mastered quite well.
Overall sound is sympathetic.
Harry Kuuchi
Timing remains a bit problematic. I think it is because the guitars are strumming a bit much in the foreground, while drums are soft.
Vocals a bit thin.
Balances have room to improve.
ShroomFeverish
Nice "room" work in the intro. Band jumps in well, with full and pleasant sound.
Vocals can afford a little bit pressure boost in the mid-range. Sound a bit light here. More of echo/reverb recommended.
I like the drum sound. I like that it is a bit heavy and not too bright. Tambourine fits in well.
Interesting nice effects in the fade-out!
Timing seems good.
Julien Meirone
I like the dry intro. Overall sound is a bit soft, but good balance in all band sounds. Vocals could afford a tad more "presence" range. Then, would need a bit less dominant volume.
Mastering probably can get that right. The mix sounds very professional. Lots of subtle and detailed improvements in many tracks.
At the start there is some reverb hanging in the buffer. I'm failing to discover the musical contribution of this.
And still, string noise is a bit much.
3ee
came right after me and did quite the opposite! I love that.
Very full and quite dry and punchy drum sound, with the right amount of "room". Good timing.
Good, brilliant vocal sound. Good volume riding. Beautiful backing vocals, (to me, leading position in this aspect)
Sounds very professional. One of my favorites.
jonsubs
the change from the intro guitar to the full sound appears to have a buffer glitch in that there is a fade-in of the previous _raw_ guitar sound that obviously has to stop right here anyway.
very soft and warm sound that I love.
lush overhead mics, blending well with the strumming guitars. good work with the compression in this.
with the compression, the upper midrange becomes a bit busy and nervous, perhaps this reflects the lyrics in that the pain and crave makes nervous.
bass sounds beautiful and full.
kick in first 16 bars is loud. a couple of hits among these might afford timing correction.
Piranha
intro is a bit loud, and the stuttering effect is also a tad louder than required.
sound is nice and compact/focused.
the high "ahhh" voice deserves a bit more drama. i think it is a bit dry.
piano is loud, or from the other side, guitars may become louder when piano is mute.
Blang
drum sounds are stomping which is good. I love the dark "industrial" reverb noise on snare and kick.
vocal tremolo effect is very interesting, perhaps some fine-tuning later in the song might make it less dominant.
the LFO might sync with the beat in a different way, and have different phase for L and R.
With the intro, the tremolo fits perfect and awesome.
but when it returns so shortly after, when the band jumps in, it should sound very different, as the whole sound scape is different.
Franz
I think the string noises need spme digital cure. then, the guitars could come closer to the snare, in joining some brightness.
other than that, the analog vintage sound is lovely.
drums create an interesting room effect. I heard that type with no other mix. did you use some reverb "re-amping"?
in some aspects I see a little resemblance with my own digital but vintage approach.
slickster 716
the intro guitar is loud.
when the piano is loud, some notes become contradicting with the vocal, I didn't find this musically pleasing.
the general sound is soft and well-balanced, vocals also quite loud but that's a matter of taste and purpose.
good guitar and snare sounds.
NateWycoff
good job for the short time!
piano is a bit loud and boomy. drums could be louder instead.
Michael Schneider
guitar noises too much.
vocal and guitar sounds are competing so it is a bit difficult to maintain focus.
GB Real
little issue with balance, I thought drums are a bit loud, in particular the kick.
vocal effects push the singer into background.
bass is a bit boomy.
Tom Immon
Intro guitars to me appear a bit "flirry", I like them more solid.
But when the full sound starts, it is very clear and solid. So, the intro contrasts it and is just a matter of taste.
I love the vocal sound and effects. Beautiful drum sounds. Overhead with cymbals might afford a small boost.
The piano sits in the mix in the right place. Also the tambourine.
Kick, bass, subsonics, seem very good here. Still, a few kick hits got drowned.
Timing sounds good, more by virtue of the balances, less by edits.
OTOH we might run into a zone where the result sounds a bit style-guided, or normal. Depends on the target audience, e.g. which radios to work with, in real world.
Kevin Gobin
Sounds very powerful. Vocals are sometimes loud.
The "star trek" effect might come a bit unmotivated, twice in a short time. Generally it is a nice idea when the dose is right.
Between intro and band start there is a little glitch.
davidpaulpage
there is some serious thunder and psychedelic vocal effect going on here.
thus, and with other details, good uniqueness in the whole thing.
we might get carried away and miss a tad of clarity in some moments, though.
But it keeps up until the end, even the fadeout has nice treatment.
Gaurav Talreja
I like the intro guitar sound.
Overall sound is very compact and powerful. Overhead track sits very well.
Guitars during the verses might afford a bit "air band". Might come a bit boxy.
I like the piano.
Drums are leading the timing, thus conflicts are kept very low. Timing appears ok.
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When someone disagrees with my opinion on a third party, this would be very interesting as well.
Different viewpoints or discoveries sure can contribute to knowledge and experience.