Great reply, thanks for the feedback its much appreciated . I did the mix on the last day on phones and I will have a look at them laterWhite Punk OD wrote: ↑Thu Jul 04, 2024 19:39 CESTI think, @rvalle and @MemphisB did the opposite to each other, both are good takes.
There are similarities in the lead vocals, clean and straightforward.
rvalle did the whole mix this way, a bit "Pop", everything in check, and might have achieved level of acceptance for some radios.
harmony vocals are rich and tight.
balances are great, especially the tonal teamwork between bass, vocals, and guitar,
except I thought the crash cymbals are a bit loud.
guitar sounds beautiful, piano is a bit in the background, and might have contributed a bit more to the dynamics.
the choir in the finale is straightforward again, nice little effects, sounds great, but does nothing extra (while some mixes gave it extra focus and color).
MemphisB turned down the bass for the first verse, which is a great idea in terms of dramaturgy, but the balance turns out a bit bright, and the hihat track with its various sounds plus cymbals are hanging out a little bit. I would have then boosted lows in the guitar and piano, and lowpassed the drumsounds and the piano each a little bit in different ways. just for a little shift in spectrum, to stay in the middle.
Then follows the big kick-in with the bass and full sound of everything. There is also deliberate kick pumping like in many old-style productions in similar genres. So, it has some Country and Folk style, very different from rvalle's "Pop".
The bass is also singing beautifully.
Nice support of tensions in the harmony vocals with volume swelling and chorus effects.
Harmony vocals and choir are beautiful but in the finale again nothing special is happening, though the reverbs fit very well into the genre.
Regarding the output/mixbus - in several of my monitorings (none is fully professional) the subsonics and low bass might be too strong.
I thought it might be interesting to point out some particular contrast between two participants.
Good luck anyway, for a good job everyone.
Best Regards
PM