Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC07 March 2018 - Voting until 01-04-2018 11:59pm GMT+2/CEST
Posted: Sun Apr 01, 2018 19:57 CEST
Here I am, finally...!
Right..here we go..
Nige - Summer Soul/Winter Mind
I do love my rock and metel, yet only ever seem to write a decent riff once every 5 years. Loads of 'em here - especially like the, 'sleazy' (no other word for it..) main one in the verse. All seems to sit together cohesively as a composition; despite all the little excursions away from the main theme you don't stray too far from the riffage so it's driving all the way, and the attention to detail is marvellous - the harmonies on both guitar and vocal work really well.
Mix wise-well a lot's been said. Sounded good to m, nice and powerful. Only things I'd change would be to have a bit more boom on the kick, in the Bonham stylee, and turn up the vocals a bit - struggled in parts to hear the lyrics. Other than that, top job - 10 points
Fix in the Mix - Contra Tiempos
....And now for something completely different.. The lo-fi bit at the start works really well. That's a great chord progression and the bassline works really well against it. The little stop for the fingerclick is a nice touch! The lead guitar is well done as well - great 'tone' as they say. I think the only thing that lets it down a bit is the drums. I do appreciate that you're wanting something quite simple, but it does all sound quite one level/velocity and I think a few edits/bit of automation between the quieter/louder sections would raise it quite a bit. Nice job though - 9 points
Kc23 - Coffee.Nothing
Like the way this one builds and the repetition, but for me it does take a bit long to get to the middle part and build (I am impatient!). I think at the end the guitar part could be more prominent (doubled with one an octave up?) and there could also be higher/rising stuff going on with the keyboard - it's an old but good trick to use over a repeating bassline like this. Mix wise the kick seemed to get a bit lost against the bass (too boomy?) at times, other than that, quite nice and clear here - 8 points.
Right..here we go..
Nige - Summer Soul/Winter Mind
I do love my rock and metel, yet only ever seem to write a decent riff once every 5 years. Loads of 'em here - especially like the, 'sleazy' (no other word for it..) main one in the verse. All seems to sit together cohesively as a composition; despite all the little excursions away from the main theme you don't stray too far from the riffage so it's driving all the way, and the attention to detail is marvellous - the harmonies on both guitar and vocal work really well.
Mix wise-well a lot's been said. Sounded good to m, nice and powerful. Only things I'd change would be to have a bit more boom on the kick, in the Bonham stylee, and turn up the vocals a bit - struggled in parts to hear the lyrics. Other than that, top job - 10 points
Fix in the Mix - Contra Tiempos
....And now for something completely different.. The lo-fi bit at the start works really well. That's a great chord progression and the bassline works really well against it. The little stop for the fingerclick is a nice touch! The lead guitar is well done as well - great 'tone' as they say. I think the only thing that lets it down a bit is the drums. I do appreciate that you're wanting something quite simple, but it does all sound quite one level/velocity and I think a few edits/bit of automation between the quieter/louder sections would raise it quite a bit. Nice job though - 9 points
Kc23 - Coffee.Nothing
Like the way this one builds and the repetition, but for me it does take a bit long to get to the middle part and build (I am impatient!). I think at the end the guitar part could be more prominent (doubled with one an octave up?) and there could also be higher/rising stuff going on with the keyboard - it's an old but good trick to use over a repeating bassline like this. Mix wise the kick seemed to get a bit lost against the bass (too boomy?) at times, other than that, quite nice and clear here - 8 points.