Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC065 January 2023 - results in preparation
Posted: Thu Feb 02, 2023 01:40 CET
Ooops, I misunderstand the end time for voting to be end of the 2. February. Damn!
But as I put so much effort in this tonight, I'll post it anyway.
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Critics for the Song-Contest
Well, to write some critiques for the works of others seems to be a harder thing for me than creating a song.
First, as you might have noticed by my entry, I’m not „up-to-date“ with the modern music styles or trends. I even cannot say which genre my own music would fit in, so I use „electronic“ to describe it.
But well, I will make a „favorites“ list and try to explain, what I like in the songs and what not.
1) Esteve Corbera
2) Arelem - Gone
3) György Becsei - Adlibs
4) cotmm68030 - matrioshka brain neural dessynchronization
5) VCA-089 - Machine Heart
Esteve Corbera - Magica Cosmica
Really calming and nice to listen. My impression is, that the melody is created by using an arpeggiator and it sometiomes seem to get out of the beat. But as there are not drums, this is negligible. My favorite one anyway.
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Arelem - Gone
+++ The overall mood fitss very well with the lyrics. the „piano“ chords could be reduces sometimes a bit. And a nice voice. I wish I could sings in tune like this, ;-)
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György Becsei - Adlibs
Very interesting compositions with a lot of changes which keep it exciting to listen. Nothing ore to say.
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cotmm68030 - matrioshka brain neural dessynchronization
++ I think it could be a perfect sound for a science fiction film about an alien planet in the dark. I specially like the „shakers“.
Although for a „song“ contest, I’m missing the music, but anyway, a great soundtrack.
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+ VCA-089 - Machine Heart
A successful interpretation of a huge driving machine. And a nice varied topic. I love the part before the end and I imagine it could be intereting to slow down the heart beat for a „sleeping phase“ and then go into dreams. But what is a machine dreaming of?s
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Mellow Browne - Fight Your Demons
It has a good drive and I like the overall sound composition. I only miss some more variations, but I guess this depends on the intentions if it’s for listening or for dancing.
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Tinnitus- Severe
I have to admit, that the first part is way to fast and somewhat chaotic for me, but then! The second part is wonderful!
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GMoneh - Grains of Sand
Interesting sounds. Some variations in the first 120 seconds would be refreshing. The melody instrument is a bit to loud for my ears, but my ears are already old. ;-)
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LifeLoop byThe Exponent would have been in my farorite list for sure.
What I learned during this contest, is as the most important part, how to level the loudness. I’ll have to go through some of my soundcloud uploads to change them to balance the loudness for all songs.
Second, I was using a sampler plugin for most of the tracks and discovered some new features which I will use in the future.
Now, good luck to all participants!
But as I put so much effort in this tonight, I'll post it anyway.
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Critics for the Song-Contest
Well, to write some critiques for the works of others seems to be a harder thing for me than creating a song.
First, as you might have noticed by my entry, I’m not „up-to-date“ with the modern music styles or trends. I even cannot say which genre my own music would fit in, so I use „electronic“ to describe it.
But well, I will make a „favorites“ list and try to explain, what I like in the songs and what not.
1) Esteve Corbera
2) Arelem - Gone
3) György Becsei - Adlibs
4) cotmm68030 - matrioshka brain neural dessynchronization
5) VCA-089 - Machine Heart
Esteve Corbera - Magica Cosmica
Really calming and nice to listen. My impression is, that the melody is created by using an arpeggiator and it sometiomes seem to get out of the beat. But as there are not drums, this is negligible. My favorite one anyway.
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Arelem - Gone
+++ The overall mood fitss very well with the lyrics. the „piano“ chords could be reduces sometimes a bit. And a nice voice. I wish I could sings in tune like this, ;-)
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György Becsei - Adlibs
Very interesting compositions with a lot of changes which keep it exciting to listen. Nothing ore to say.
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cotmm68030 - matrioshka brain neural dessynchronization
++ I think it could be a perfect sound for a science fiction film about an alien planet in the dark. I specially like the „shakers“.
Although for a „song“ contest, I’m missing the music, but anyway, a great soundtrack.
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+ VCA-089 - Machine Heart
A successful interpretation of a huge driving machine. And a nice varied topic. I love the part before the end and I imagine it could be intereting to slow down the heart beat for a „sleeping phase“ and then go into dreams. But what is a machine dreaming of?s
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Mellow Browne - Fight Your Demons
It has a good drive and I like the overall sound composition. I only miss some more variations, but I guess this depends on the intentions if it’s for listening or for dancing.
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Tinnitus- Severe
I have to admit, that the first part is way to fast and somewhat chaotic for me, but then! The second part is wonderful!
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GMoneh - Grains of Sand
Interesting sounds. Some variations in the first 120 seconds would be refreshing. The melody instrument is a bit to loud for my ears, but my ears are already old. ;-)
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LifeLoop byThe Exponent would have been in my farorite list for sure.
What I learned during this contest, is as the most important part, how to level the loudness. I’ll have to go through some of my soundcloud uploads to change them to balance the loudness for all songs.
Second, I was using a sampler plugin for most of the tracks and discovered some new features which I will use in the future.
Now, good luck to all participants!