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SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC076 December 2023 - Winners announced

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Hello and welcome to the Songwriting Competition 076 - December 2023



:information_source: BEFORE WE GET STARTED:
  • Please consult the official and very simple "Rules and Guidelines" (TL;DR version) for the Songwriting Competition regarding principles of the game, it's engaging game mechanics (allowed editing/re-submission of your entry until the deadline has been reached) and upload/submission guidelines.
  • The general idea of this game is to "...just make music", to also challenge yourself by stepping a bit out of your comfort zone, and take a dip at realms you've never worked in before. Instrumentals are just as welcome as productions with vocals.
  • The Genre and "Premise" of this months challenge can be found in in post #002
  • Filename Template (Important): SWC076__ArtistName__TrackName.wav or .mp3
    • example: SWC076__MisterFox__ColorOfTheSky.wav
    • example: SWC076__Mister_Fox__Color_of_the_sky.wav
Read more about this month's competition further down below. And if you got any question, please also reach out on Discord.



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:arrow_right: SONGWRITING COMPETITION THREAD INDEX

Post #001 -- Introduction post and index for the various stages of the Songwriting Competition. Will be updated as we progress
Post #002 -- Submission Period: General Information, Source Material, Sponsors
Post #003 -- Cheat Sheet: A couple of examples / audio demos for this month's challenge (limited if genre is "free to select")
Post #046 -- Voting: Summarized entries and start of voting process
Post #101 -- Results: Results of the Songwriting Competition
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SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC076 December 2023 - Submissions until 24-DEC-2023 23:59 UTC+1/CET

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CURRENT CHALLENGE - GENERAL INFORMATION

Time Frame: Friday, 01st December 2023 to Sunday, 24th December 2023 (24 days)

Challenge submission will end on 24-DEC-2023, 23:59 UTC+1/CET (Germany) - until further notice.

Want to find out if you're still within the deadline, please either consult the Global Countdown (dedicated page), or the countdown on the landing site. There will also be short reminders on Social Media and on Discord. Does the game time frame feel too long? Why not set a personal shorter one of 5-7 days absolute max to push yourself to focus on the essentials, then use the rest of the time to ask for feedback and possible refinements. :bulb:



SONGWRITING THEME: "Lights" (Picture Theme)
GENRE: free to select


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Image Source: Mix Challenge (staff, photo of lights in Rixdorf/Germany, 2022), released under Berne Convention

Bonus Images (for inspiration): photo 01 / photo 02



A few word about this month's theme:
Staff (Mister Fox) wrote: We're having a "Picture Theme" this month.

There will be no extensive brief with twists and turns. Please have a look, get inspired by the image and the theme.

Let your mind wander for a bit. Then start writing. :pencil2: :musical_keyboard: :notes:
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Your task for this Songwriting Competition:
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This month, you can create a production in any music genre you feel like.


A short explanation of the concept of this month's game: The general idea is to draw inspiration from the picture(s). However do not solely fixate on that particular photo and it's details alone. Rather focus on the "overarching concept". The picture and possible provided key words can have many different meanings. How you interpret it, is up to you.

You set your own parameters and limitations, e.g. style and genre, melodic questions and counter arguments. As long as you don't exceed 10 minutes of runtime, neither have endless padded out repetition. Please keep us listeners engaged. And as usual - vocals are optional. Don't feel pressured to provide any.


Just make music and have fun!

I'm curious about what you come up with! :headphones:


Songwriting Rule Summary / Add-On Rules:
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:arrow_right: LICENSE SPONSORS (Bonus Prizes):

A huge thank you goes to our very generous License Sponsors for this month's game. Those being (in alphabetical order):

Cherry Audio, Ghostwave Audio, Hollow Sun, Hornet Plugins, IK Multimedia, JRR Sounds, kv331 audio, Luftrum, Musiclab, Rekkerd Sounds, satyatunes - Sound / Graphic Design, and Tone2.


A detailed list of offerings can be found in the following information block.
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Good luck to all participants.
And most importantly, have fun!
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SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC076 December 2023 - Submissions until 24-DEC-2023 23:59 UTC+1/CET

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AUDIO EXAMPLES:
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Articles and Info Pages:

A great starting point is the "Addendum"/Supplementary thread for the Songwriting Competition
Songwriting Competition - Addendum: Music Maps and BPM Charts

Since the genre this month is "free to select", there are no clear pointers




Music examples (selection for inspiration, 00 videos):

No music examples available this month. But I can always recommend to enter random genre search words either into Youtube, Spotify or whatever music streaming services you prefer using.
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Please also check in with the following threads in the the Gear Talk sub-forum, if you're on the look-out for new tools:
Places to fuel your GAS (Gear Acquisition Syndrome) (the starting point if you're in need of audio tools -- from free to affordable).


if you're new to/need help with songwriting - please check out the following tools:
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More tools of the trade
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UPDATED: 29-NOV-2023 22:30 UTC+1, updated 00-DEC-2023 00:00 UTC+1
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC076 December 2023 - Submissions until 24-DEC-2023 23:59 UTC+1/CET

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A theme like Lights always brightens one's mood, doesn't it? :smile:
I decided to do all instruments by foot/hand (that is MIDI here) -- not using any prefab loops /sequences.

UPDATE 1: Lady Incognita had a very valid argument re the sound (was organ with rotation FX) during that straight 4/4 part (from min 2:35 on).
So that part got overhauled ... :idea:

UPDATE 2: Changed Soundcloud file to a correctly named version / contents are unchanged / final version



Tech specs
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Last edited by APi_ZZ on Sun Dec 24, 2023 14:55 CET, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC076 December 2023 - Submissions until 24-DEC-2023 23:59 UTC+1/CET

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APi_ZZ wrote:
Fri Dec 08, 2023 15:31 CET
A theme like Lights always brightens one's mood, doesn't it? :smile:
Totally agree! I'm enjoying working on mine, but I'm being super slow.

As for your entry, I really enjoyed all the instrumentation and the whole composition. 🧡 Nice change of style for you. Very airy and dreamy, with lovely folk and world influences. Rhythms and melodies are sweet and reflective. The synth that starts at 2:35 (doubled with another one like it after a bit?) is the only thing that feels a bit out of place for me in this composition because of its tone/texture, but at 3:08 we return to more of the original feel. The odd meters are very relaxing. Very nicely done! And thanks for mentioning that Bodhran, I'll go get it. 😊
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Lady Incognita wrote:
Sat Dec 09, 2023 00:33 CET
[...] The synth that starts at 2:35 (doubled with another one like it after a bit?) is the only thing that feels a bit out of place for me in this composition because of its tone/texture [...]
THX for listening closely :wink:, this part got reworked -- see original post.
Add'l info: File name changed to correct spelling ... :roll:
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SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC076 December 2023 - Submissions until 24-DEC-2023 23:59 UTC+1/CET

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A friendly reminder:
Including today, 14 days left to submit your production.

So far, we have 1 entry and some healthy interaction.



If you want to access the extended game mechanics of the Songwriting Competition (asking for feedback during production), please try to release your first edits within the next 7 days to have enough time to get possible feedback (if needed/wanted) and continue to work on your song.

To those sitting on the fence - please don't feel scared off and think "the bar is set too high, I will never make it" - set yourself a shorter private deadline. Just make music, submit your entry, join the conversation. See where this goes.

By joining, you're already a winner. The rest is bonus. :tu:
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC076 December 2023 - Submissions until 24-DEC-2023 23:59 UTC+1/CET

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APi_ZZ wrote:
Fri Dec 08, 2023 15:31 CET
I decided to do all instruments by foot/hand (that is MIDI here) -- not using any prefab loops /sequences.
Nice! I do like a bit of ethnic percussion and the 'live' playing with odd meters is an impressive achievement
One small point - I think the vocal is running just a little bit hot at around 2:50 - 3:06 with a tiny bit of distortion creeping in on those high notes
Otherwise - great effort! :tu:
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC076 December 2023 - Submissions until 24-DEC-2023 23:59 UTC+1/CET

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Hello fellow contestants,

this is my final entry for this month's competition:



The WAV-version is here:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1TCKNaX ... drive_link

I was inspired by the picture for the challenge and also by the time of year.
It is a simple but hopefully memorable song. My goal was to write a melody you can easily hum along the day after you heard it.


Edit 1:
Chords:
Intro: Emaj, dbmin7, Gbmaj, dbmin
Verse (3x): Emaj, dbmin7, Gbmaj, dbmin x 2
Chorus (2x): Emaj, Bmaj, Gbmaj, dbmin x 2
Outro: Emaj

Tools used:
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Last edited by KukoBass on Sun Dec 24, 2023 16:57 CET, edited 3 times in total.
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KukoBass wrote:
Thu Dec 14, 2023 09:20 CET
This is my WIP for this month:
It is a simple but hopefully memorable song. My goal was to write a melody you can easily hum along the day after you heard it.
I'm not sure which things I should work on. Any feedback is welcome.
Hi Kukobass. Just had a couple of listens to your track. I think it would help to know what production tools and vsts you used, and also what you would mostly like feedback on, but here's my perspective nonetheless. Hope it helps. 😊

You're very meticulous in your arrangement, giving all your instrumentation their roles, and creating a good structure for your track to follow. Nicely done! 👍

I am a big fan of simple memorable songs. I think a simple lovely melody expressively delivered can capture a listener's attention surprisingly well, and more often than not, better than its complex cousins.

So with that in mind, my feedback focuses on what can bring out your melody more in terms of expression. In my view these would help:
  • Humanizing the notes more so they fall just a little more naturally
  • Using expression and articulation in the played notes whether you use sampled instruments or synths (e.g. change in dynamics like starting a note softer and finishing louder, pitch modulation to mimic little glides and vibrato, little variations at times in repeated phrases with extra notes or embellishments)
Easiest start would be to humanize some of the tracks, and use some volume automation on the lead, and see what other expression and articulation options your instrument offers so you can just add a pinch of that here and there. All this allows the melody to reflect your feeling - the up and down, the movement... and the audience hears that instinctively. 🎵
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