I found a glitch in the original overhead track in the second chorus and repaired it with the corresponding snippet from the first one. I also found two or three glitches in the guitar tracks and palm mutes and tamed them.
I quadruple checked all the vocal tracks and checked the part at 2:02 with laser ears
. I could not find any obvious mistakes but I lowered the sibilance at the mentioned spot to have a better transition between the two tracks. I also tackled some annoying resonances and I hope it’s better now. I then backed off the delays a bit to make the vocals more upfront. While I was at it I added a light MicroShift on some of screams double to give them a little bit of a push. Didn’t touch the rest of the mix.Cheers, Chris
https://www.dropbox.com/s/ywyhceximu5gq ... 2.wav?dl=0
Guitars needed to come up, especially the melody-onestring ones in the chorus and the octave riff. but also the main guitars are louder now and slightly less scooped. Vocals have been reworked level and automation-wise. some of the chorus parts were way low. the overheads lost some exessive top end boost and that snappy snare was lowered a tad bit. Bass got som extra 1k to cut through and the whole mix now feels less scooped and more balanced in my humble opinion.
Anyway, I hope you like my revisions.