SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC088 December 2024 - Winners announced

[Dasein]

Hi, sorry for doing this so late, however I have been working on the song since then. I just want to say that I'm very thankful for the feedback, I took it, and I used it. I have a new version (I also changed the name to "Winter Peace"), I will not post it here, since the competition has already ended, but you can check it on the original link. (First post xp)

Thanks @Vanilla Puff for the 'tremolo violins' and the 'percussion' recommendation.

Thanks @BenjiRage for the 'enhance the attack' recommendation.

Thanks @Paramnesia for the 'explore all the notes' recommendation. Sorry, that I haven't talked to you on Discord, but hadn't have something new until now.

Thanks @Ike H-Mope for the 'bigger soundstage' recommendation.

Thanks @EsteveCorbera for the 'extending the notes' recommendation.

Thanks @JeroenZuiderwijk for the 'transitions' recommendation.

Thanks @becsei_gyorgy for the 'Interstellar' comparison.

Thanks @Elcubano for the 'Introducing a more positive or epic passage' recommendation.

Thanks @ThomC for the 'sustain pedal' and 'legato' recommendations, they really really helped to improve the song. Thanks!

Thanks @Koekepan for the 'the pace of the work doesn't feel like breathing' point

And obviously thanks to @Mister Fox for the initial feedback, which was clearly the starting point of all of this.