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SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC091 March 2025 - results in preparation

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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC091 March 2025 - Submissions until 24-MAR-2025 23:59 UTC+1/CET

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Post by alphageeks »

Chasey24 wrote:
Mon Mar 24, 2025 01:30 CET
Greetings and salutations,

I enjoyed composing with this chord progression. As a hobbyist, I always feel rushed to finish these competitions. But, I actually made it in time to submit this month(although I wish I had more time to polish the production...didn't have time to do any volume automation).
I attempted to give a little variation to the sixteen bar progression in some sections. All sixteen bars are used, except in the bridge section, where I only used the latter half. As far as the genre: I try not to focus in one genre, unless the occasion calls for a specific one. I guess I would call this soft rock or pop? All virtual instruments used - no vocals. For the intro, I happened across a unique pad in the Lunaris Kontakt instrument. One of the four voices is kind of de-tuned and delayed. I was going to mute that voice, but it grew on me the more I listened, so it's kind of a "happy accident".

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/r9ivofx5 ... qgfb3&dl=0
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The guitar sounds are very effective and the melody is deep. I think it's a wonderful piece.
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC091 March 2025 - Submissions until 24-MAR-2025 23:59 UTC+1/CET

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Post by alphageeks »

Blang wrote:
Mon Mar 24, 2025 11:34 CET
Hi fellow music makers,

For this challenge I wanted to make a lofi hiphop beat. For that vibe I added a 7th to all the chords to make it more jazz-like. To get a nice base with some movement I added an arpeggiator to the midi chords and ran it through my analog synth (Behringer Pro-800) while tweaking the knobs. All notes are delayed a bit to give it this laidback, wonky feel in combination with the drums that have a slightly different groove; After that some pads through the same synth. Just so that I had enough structure to come up with a melody. My classical guitar turned out to work better for the melody than my more jazzy electric guitar; It creates nice contrast with the synthetic sounds.
It’s hard to make a 2 bar drum pattern not feel stale after a while. That’s why I played the bass more freely; doing about 4-5 takes throughout and then picking the best parts.
The beat is programmed with samples I recorded myself.

I hope you get some studying done with this one :P
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1aleaHO ... sp=sharing
It's sophisticated and tasteful, and the guitar and lo-fi sounds work really well together. It feels like the guitar is singing.
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC091 March 2025 - Submissions until 24-MAR-2025 23:59 UTC+1/CET

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Post by alphageeks »

VCA-089 wrote:
Mon Mar 24, 2025 18:56 CET
My submission: Ashes Of Time

WAV: https://drive.google.com/file/d/14hicW8 ... sp=sharing
MP3: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1J2VP1m ... sp=sharing

An 80's inspired synth-rock piece, as I thought that this chord progression would fit perfectly for this type of song.

It seems that I've misunderstood the rules about the chord progression (modified it quite drastically at some places). I realized it too late, when the main parts of the arrangement were done. I will leave it as it is.

Instruments and techniques:

1. The drums are a combination of samples from TR-707 and 505 drum machines.
2. The provided chord progression was used for the piano arrangement. The whole song was built around it. The main piano part is the SampleScience "Cinematic Piano" library. The chords and melody are separate instances processed differently. The chords are slightly EQed and compressed and the melody has a very strong modulation effect on it."Room Piano" used for the bass notes. Additionally, "Drone Piano" is a reversed and looped piano library that is playing the same chords as the main part, creating a sort of a synth-like pad.
3. The electric guitars are MusicLab's "RealLPC". Two instances for the rhythm and one for the solo. Processed with "TH-U" guitar suite, a typical 80's mid-gain guitar sound;
4. The main lead synthesizer is "Repro-5". A simple unison lead with glide;
5. "Dexed" is used for the bass part, synth-arp and SFX;
6. "PG-8X" is used for the bright synth-keys layered with piano chords;
7. FL Studio "FLEX" playing the sounds from the general MIDI library is used for the synth-choir and brass chords layered with the piano chords;
8. Some of the sounds from "Ocean Swift - Sounds Of Life" free sample library were used to create transition effects;
9. BPB "Dirty VHS" is a lo-fi effect switching on and off in some sections of the song (mainly in the breakdowns).

Technical details:
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The electro melody with a slightly lonely atmosphere is impressive. As the sun sets, the evening scenery unfolds.
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC091 March 2025 - Submissions until 24-MAR-2025 23:59 UTC+1/CET

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Post by juhu »

Hi,

Just uploaded my final revision:
juhu wrote:
Mon Mar 10, 2025 16:32 CET
Hi,

1) Here’s my entry named “Five in the Chamber“ (Rev4 final): :phones:
http://tinkerstate.com/mix-challenge/SW ... hamber.wav

List of Rev4 changes:
  • Slightly randomized note timings and velocities on the piano;
  • Auto-generated pitch-bend events per note for bowed string instruments;
  • Slightly randomized note timings and pitch-bend events for bowed instruments;
  • Made some Mid/Side EQ adjustments in order to tame low-mid build-up.
The slight randomizations made things a tad more "humanized" and the overall soundscape is now clearer I think.

2) Documentation for prior revisions below (click on "SHOW" to expand): :educate:
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC091 March 2025 - Submissions until 24-MAR-2025 23:59 UTC+1/CET

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Post by ThomC »

Hey everyone!

Here's my track for this challenge. This time, I went for a short cinematic track in the spirit of the movie companies intros. The chord progression inspired me to go in that direction very naturally (hence the name). It's kind of a tribute to some of the great childhood memories I have of going to the cinema with my family. I hope you'll enjoy it! :)

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1WOoXT8 ... rive_link

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SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC091 March 2025 - preparation phase

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Post by Mister Fox »

It is the 25th March 2025, 0:25 UTC+1/CET - this month's Songwriting Competition has official ended


STATISTICS:
  • If I didn't miscount, we have 14 submissions this month (04 entries more than last month, and also 01 entry more than March 2024)
  • We have 0 submissions after the deadline (as of 25-MAR-2025 00:20 UTC+1/CET)
  • We have 0 submission that have been pushed to "Bonus Entries"
  • We have 1 submission that has been withdrawn mid game (therefore it can't count to the overall participation - one additional entry has been withdrawn mid Feedback and Voting time-frame)
  • The "staff balancing vote" add-on rule does not apply (special game mechanics do apply)
  • "Sole Winners Podium" rule (equal or less than eight participants results in a single winner) does not apply (3-position Winners Podium)


:arrow_right: How do we go from there?

Over the course of the next (hopefully) 24-48 hours (usually up to 6-12 hours maximum after the game has ended), I'll gather all links into one post and hot-link to that from the first post of the thread. Please, no more changes to your entries, but please do check your links that these entries are accessible and downloadable, not to mention documented. We then perform with the final feedback and "public vote" system.


We have 13 official / still active participants. We are adapting the overhauled vote mechanic, as talked about in the following news blog:

Songwriting Competition - game mechanic changes: Voting Process (October 2022 Update)
(Info: I am aware that the Rule Book has not been properly updated yet. Time constraints, apologies for the inconvenience)


Summarized:
 ! Bonus Info
  • Participants can (and must) vote for their Top 5 entries (tiered mechanic).
  • You're furthermore asked to please reflect on your experience this month (2-3 paragraphs max), what you have learned this month, what you would like to do different in the future, etc. (personal growth)
  • You are also asked to give feedback to at least five (number: 5) entries (tiered mechanic) -- things that stood out to you, providing some final thoughts and constructive feedback for possible improvements. This adds to the learning experience of our community. It is recommended that these entries are outside of your personal "top entry" voting.
  • Have the chance to get additional bonus points if you decide to invest the time to provide more constructive feedback than the requested minimum. It must be more than just "nice production, please keep up the good work" however. This is to boost more interaction and can balance out your overall points on the score sheet. (get 1 point if you give constructive feedback to 02 to 03 more participants, get 2 points if you give helpful feedback for everyone, bonus entries not counting)
  • The "Voting Process" mechanic is mandatory for all participants, and the only criteria to drop out of the game by not partaking. Please don't just collect feedback, and not give back to the community.
  • The overall "Bonus Point" mechanic still applies. Please update your posts with proper production documentation, most notably regarding whom you have collaborated with (as in: proper credits -- not doing so will result in a -2pt deduction on the score sheet at the end of the game). Please also make your entries downloadable, or provide an additional download link if not existing already. You got until the voting period has ended. (please: no changes to the arrangement anymore)
Please cast your vote (not the feedback) in collective form through the "spoiler text" bbcode (button on the WYSIWYG editor that features the orange triangle with an exclamation mark in it). Please use the forum username of the participant to make it easier during the score collection to address what vote belongs to whom. And please, only have one post as final feedback and vote. Thank you.
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 ⚠ Moderation Message from Mister Fox  
For transparency:

The staff (Mister Fox) will not give feedback to all entries and/or cast a vote this month.

(unless there is a tie that can not be broken otherwise)

Feedback from non-participants and/or collaborators is highly encouraged (voting not needed!). The same goes for entries after the deadline, or those that sadly do not count for the current running game (even if you've exceeded the deadline, why not post your entry regardless?). Musicians and Engineers are always after constructive criticism. This is what this forum is about.





Have some general feedback? Please provide that here:
Songwriting Competition - General Gossip Thread, or on Discord.



Please give me a moment to collect all entries.
Please make sure your files are accessible, and please have an eye on this thread! :tu:




EDIT: 25-MAR-2025 00:25 - initial post
EDIT: 26-MAR-2025 20:00 - update on withdrawn entries
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SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC091 March 2025 - Voting until 01-APR-2025 23:59 UTC+2/CEST

#57

Post by Mister Fox »

Let us kick off the VOTING PROCESS, which will end on Tuesday, 01-APR-2025 23:59 UTC+2/CEST latest.


There is a GLOBAL COUNTDOWN to check for deadlines.
Just follow this link: Global Countdown (on homepage)


Here is the collection of productions from all participants (in hope that I didn't forget anyone). As usual, if you click on the small upwards-arrow right beside the quoted name, you can jump to the original post and read up on the documentation for this production.


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alphageeks wrote:
Thu Mar 06, 2025 06:38 CET
"250305"

WAV: Dropbox playback and download
juhu wrote:
Mon Mar 10, 2025 16:32 CET
"Five in the Chamber"

WAV: Direct download
efemgie wrote:
Tue Mar 11, 2025 20:28 CET
"I Offer You A Chord"

WAV: Google Drive playback and download
APi_ZZ wrote:
Wed Mar 12, 2025 17:09 CET
"Sixteen"

Marc Fey wrote:
Fri Mar 14, 2025 18:31 CET
"Progression

WAV: Dropbox playback and download
EatMe wrote:
Wed Mar 19, 2025 00:57 CET
"En Route Sur San Jose"



WAV: Direct download (entry at lower volume)
FLAC: Direct download (normalized link)
EsteveCorbera wrote:
Fri Mar 21, 2025 17:05 CET
"Acords Copiats"

Strange wrote:
Sun Mar 23, 2025 22:31 CET
"I rise"



WAV: MyCloud download
Mellow Browne wrote:
Sun Mar 23, 2025 23:06 CET
"What The Funk"

WAV: Google Drive playback and download
Chasey24 wrote:
Mon Mar 24, 2025 01:30 CET
"The Offer"

WAV: Dropbox playback and download
Blang wrote:
Mon Mar 24, 2025 11:34 CET
"Recipe 3"

WAV: Google Drive playback and download
VCA-089 wrote:
Mon Mar 24, 2025 18:56 CET
"Ashes Of Time"

WAV: Google Drive playback and download
MP3: Google Drive playback and download
ThomC wrote:
Mon Mar 24, 2025 23:55 CET
"Another Night At The Movies"

WAV: Google Drive playback and download
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WITHDRAWN (not participating - feel free to give feedback, but you sadly can not vote for these entries)


<no withdrawn entries>
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BONUS ENTRIES (submitted after the deadline / outside of game scope - feel free to give feedback, but you sadly can not vote for these entries)


<no bonus entries>
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:arrow_right: GAME MECHANIC SUMMARY:
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Good luck to all participants! :tu:




If you have an idea for a future Songwriting Competition, please post about this in the theme/genre request page or on Discord.


Post updated: 25-MAR-2025 00:59 UTC+1/CET -- initial post
Post updated: 26-MAR-2025 22:20 UTC+1/CET -- re-instating entry by Soni2Music until I get a response from the user. Else it will be moved to "Bonus Entries"
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC091 March 2025 - Voting until 01-APR-2025 23:59 UTC+2/CEST

#58

Post by EatMe »

Here is my personal opinion on the rest of the entries and the re-submitted one by juhu.
I will post my votes soon.

ThomC: An excellent, movieworth, crafted piece.
I can not really hear much of the original chord scheme provided.
The arrangement, mixing and composition in this is excellent.
Iis it even a song? Or is it an intro to a very exciting movie?
Imagination is sparkling from this song. Very good work.


Blang: Very well made into something like a song.
I can't hear all the original chords from the chord scheme provided.
You did however create a good song from a part of the chords.
Well done on the instrumentation, arrangement, drums and composition.
Compliments on how harmonious everything sounds. Very well done.


MellowBrowne: Beautiful instrumental hip-hop.
A very good take, albeit with not all of the original chords provided.
This is a very well made harmonious composition.
I feel that some more accenting an be added to the (hihat?) drums, to give even more swing.
The production is excellent, and would be suitable for raps on top.


juhu (take 3): Very well done on bettering the song.
The notes in the lead sound much more, very, related to each in your 3rd version.
The composition sounds much better than the first version that I gave comment on,
and has no longer the "robotic" composition sound from the first version,
and became a good work of art. So, my first comment does no longer stand.
The mix of all elements is on-point.
A pity that there are no drums and cymbals to enhance the excitement at some moments.


VCA-089: A very complete, 80's like song.
Too bad you have modified so much of the original chords, I can't really recognize a scheme like the original.
The instrumentation, drums and mixing are very decent.
The whole song is a polished and complete whole. Well done.


Chasey24: A good arrangement.
In this one I also can not hear all the chords from the original chord scheme provided.
Still, the arrangement, drums and songwriting are good.
The guitar solo also sounds on-point and in-key, although it is sounding through-out almost the whole song,
the guitar solo does not function as answer to a main theme, like a lead-out or solo on a smaller part (near the end).
The whole song is quite a polished whole. Well done.


EsteveCorbera: Quite an exciting work with all these sound effects.
The mix of all elements stands out in this song.
The (303-like) solo in the middle sounds a bit unrelated to the rest of the music.
The song was not too harmonious, not too bad though.
(It is very difficult to make something beautiful with the provided chord scheme..)


Strange: Pretty decent songwriter work, but not like the provided scheme.
I can not hear much of the original provided chord scheme, sounds rather like a F G Am Am.
The mixing is on point, I'm not sure about the vocals performance, sounds a bit unpracticed.
Overall not too bad, pretty decent work.

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Good luck to all participants!
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC091 March 2025 - Voting until 01-APR-2025 23:59 UTC+2/CEST

#59

Post by Strange »

EatMe wrote:
Tue Mar 25, 2025 03:17 CET
Here is my personal opinion on the rest of the entries and the re-submitted one by juhu.
I will post my votes soon.


Strange: Pretty decent songwriter work, but not like the provided scheme.
I can not hear much of the original provided chord scheme, sounds rather like a F G Am Am.
The mixing is on point, I'm not sure about the vocals performance, sounds a bit unpracticed.
Overall not too bad, pretty decent work.

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Good luck to all participants!
Thank you for your feedback. BUT you can literally hear the original chord progression the whole song. Only two variations in length in the intro an the outro and the second verse repeats the first 8 bars.
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC091 March 2025 - Voting until 01-APR-2025 23:59 UTC+2/CEST

#60

Post by juhu »

Hello,

I hereby provide my mandatory 3 items:

1) The TOP 5 votes, ordered from highest to lowest:
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2) The feedback to fellow musicians:
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3) The personal reflection:
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