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SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC088 December 2024 - Winners announced
- Mister Fox
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SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC088 December 2024 - Voting until 03-JAN-2024 23:59 UTC+1/CET
- Mister Fox
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SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC088 December 2024 - Voting until 03-JAN-2024 23:59 UTC+1/CET
The entry by @PonySho has been moved to the "Withdrawn" section.
Please feel free to give feedback, but you sadly can not vote for this entry anymore.
Please remember:
The deadline for the feedback and voting process has been extended by 02 days to 03-JAN-2024 23:59 UTC+1/CET. As of this moment, that is a bit more than 08 days left. So far we have feedback by 02 participants.
- BenjiRage
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC088 December 2024 - Voting until 03-JAN-2024 23:59 UTC+1/CET
Hi All
I hope you've been having a peaceful and happy Christmas.
Here's my feedback for everyone (including the withdrawn and bonus entries):
My top 5 this month are:
My takeaways from this month's competition:
Best regards,
Benji
I hope you've been having a peaceful and happy Christmas.
Here's my feedback for everyone (including the withdrawn and bonus entries):
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Benji
Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC088 December 2024 - Voting until 03-JAN-2024 23:59 UTC+1/CET
Hi everyone, here comes my feedback. I would like to remark that these are my impressions and feelings as I was listening to, so I'm sorry in advance if I'm too harsh or direct.
Feedback
My Top 5
This month's reflection
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC088 December 2024 - Voting until 03-JAN-2024 23:59 UTC+1/CET
Alright finally got a chance to sit down and give everyone's tracks a fair listen. Quite a lot of varience in the writing styles here its really cool to see the directions everyone went on just from viewing that picture.
Here is my feedback for everyone, some got more than others if you want anything more specific please feel free to ask I love to talk music! I would also like to mention that I really do count production as part of the song for better or worse, some people like to overlook it and focus more on the writing but I think its just another part of the whole process so keep that in mind as well!
My top 5 for this contest are:
My thoughts for this contest:
Thanks for everyone who took the time to listen to my track and for your feedback it helps me look at things in a different light and improve. Goodluck to everyone!
Here is my feedback for everyone, some got more than others if you want anything more specific please feel free to ask I love to talk music! I would also like to mention that I really do count production as part of the song for better or worse, some people like to overlook it and focus more on the writing but I think its just another part of the whole process so keep that in mind as well!
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC088 December 2024 - Voting until 03-JAN-2024 23:59 UTC+1/CET
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC088 December 2024 - Voting until 03-JAN-2024 23:59 UTC+1/CET
Good night,
As always, thank you all for participating and thank you Mister Fox for organizing this competition.
Thanks to everyone for the comments and votes made so far.
Congratulations on the good songs you have presented this month.
On a personal level, I have learned that consistency pays off. I started my song without a specific direction and as I worked on it, I was able to better define the lines of my song. I am also happy to have used the breaks to break up the monotony and to use layers with different sounds sporadically. That is, there are sounds that come in and out without having to have them active until the end. As a detail, I also want to highlight that it was the first time I have automated the DAW Tempo to slow down the end of the song. It is always good to experiment to learn new things.
Thank you.
I leave you comments on your works:
Dasein – Night Peace
Exciting song. I really like this combination between piano, cello and orchestra. There are many melodic ideas in your song.
Things to improve, the orchestra sounds a little unrealistic. Maybe you could play with extending the ‘releases’ to lengthen the notes and improve the expression. The piano sounds too much the same, maybe you could play with modifying the speed of the notes a little more.
Despite all this, your song conveys a lot of passion. It could be a great love song to accompany some images.
JeroenZuiderwijk – A Journey
Frankly interesting work. You really managed to make something simple, as you say, not boring at all. I really like when the guitar comes in at the end. Good idea!
Maybe you overused the delays and at some moments the reverberation. There are moments when the tail of the reverb sounds too much and, on the other hand, I would have added more reverberation to the drums or rhythms.
Ike_H-mope – Stars
Good use of the Synthesizer V for the voices. At first I thought they were real.
The choice of string instrument is curious. The works performed by Jordi Savall came to mind. The sound of the Viola de Gamba is very harsh. I am not used to hearing this instrument. Personal opinion, I would have liked the song better with a cello, it would be easier to listen to.
Elcubano – The Comet 07
Very original song. I don't know the Captain Future series but the jazzy treatment you propose is very far from what I would imagine for space, but I don't want to say that it can't be used. It's just a personal comment.
I like the initial sound effects with the guitar similar to delay, they are effects that remind me of science fiction movies. Very good.
The song is also very good.
As a comment, maybe you put too much reverb in the middle part that masks the mix a bit.
Paramnesia – Space
I like the quiet guitars with delay at the beginning. But I wasn't expecting the explosion that followed. It broke all my expectations and surprised me. You really nailed the comment that you say that unexpected surprises can be found in space.
I think it's a good work, with good vocal performance and the sound of the metal guitars is very well done.
As a comment, there are moments with a too long reverb tail.
becsei_gyorgy – Timeless Space
As always, a very good work. Good voices and very good all the instruments you put behind it.
I love the sound of the 80s and you nailed it very well. Good lyrics.
Good mix.
I couldn't tell you things to improve.
BenjiRage - Overworld
What a great song with good use of the voices. The man from Synth V should sponsor this challenge
. I could almost tell you the same thing I told the previous colleague. Good song and good use of instruments reminiscent of the 80s. Very good work.
I wouldn't know what to say to improve either, everything seems very good to me.
Koekepan - AstheAirRunsOut
I like the idea that you draw with these experimental sounds throughout your song. Very interesting song because it is very original. I like all the details you give in the description of the song entry.
I choose your song with my eyes closed and I find the development it has great.
Perhaps, as an improvement or comment, I would say that the sound of the bell (electric piano I suppose) is a little too hard, too close, too prominent. But it is just a personal opinion.
VanillaPuff – PurpleWorld
Different song. Good bass that gives the song rhythm. Good play with the sounds of the synthesizers that fluctuate here and there. It has just the right length to make the song interesting without getting tiring.
Good mix and with good details in terms of sound effects.
ThomC – Out of Space
What beauty. What magic your song has. I'm surprised because your song has reached my heart.
I really like the piano, the voice that is there almost imperceptibly, the strings. What sensitivity with which your song is developed. I take my hat off to you.
PonySho - Space
Good song. Good guitars and good vocal performance.
Too bad you had to leave because your work was very good.
As a comment I would say that I find the lead vocals and guitars too dry. Maybe a little more reverb would improve things even more.
DavidB - The Probe
Good presentation. I really like the initial sound environment. Good job of creating sound layers with a good mix. Reminds me of current works by Jean-Michel Jarre.
(translated with google, sorry for the imperfections that the translation may contain)
As always, thank you all for participating and thank you Mister Fox for organizing this competition.
Thanks to everyone for the comments and votes made so far.
Congratulations on the good songs you have presented this month.
On a personal level, I have learned that consistency pays off. I started my song without a specific direction and as I worked on it, I was able to better define the lines of my song. I am also happy to have used the breaks to break up the monotony and to use layers with different sounds sporadically. That is, there are sounds that come in and out without having to have them active until the end. As a detail, I also want to highlight that it was the first time I have automated the DAW Tempo to slow down the end of the song. It is always good to experiment to learn new things.
Thank you.
I leave you comments on your works:
Dasein – Night Peace
Exciting song. I really like this combination between piano, cello and orchestra. There are many melodic ideas in your song.
Things to improve, the orchestra sounds a little unrealistic. Maybe you could play with extending the ‘releases’ to lengthen the notes and improve the expression. The piano sounds too much the same, maybe you could play with modifying the speed of the notes a little more.
Despite all this, your song conveys a lot of passion. It could be a great love song to accompany some images.
JeroenZuiderwijk – A Journey
Frankly interesting work. You really managed to make something simple, as you say, not boring at all. I really like when the guitar comes in at the end. Good idea!
Maybe you overused the delays and at some moments the reverberation. There are moments when the tail of the reverb sounds too much and, on the other hand, I would have added more reverberation to the drums or rhythms.
Ike_H-mope – Stars
Good use of the Synthesizer V for the voices. At first I thought they were real.
The choice of string instrument is curious. The works performed by Jordi Savall came to mind. The sound of the Viola de Gamba is very harsh. I am not used to hearing this instrument. Personal opinion, I would have liked the song better with a cello, it would be easier to listen to.
Elcubano – The Comet 07
Very original song. I don't know the Captain Future series but the jazzy treatment you propose is very far from what I would imagine for space, but I don't want to say that it can't be used. It's just a personal comment.
I like the initial sound effects with the guitar similar to delay, they are effects that remind me of science fiction movies. Very good.
The song is also very good.
As a comment, maybe you put too much reverb in the middle part that masks the mix a bit.
Paramnesia – Space
I like the quiet guitars with delay at the beginning. But I wasn't expecting the explosion that followed. It broke all my expectations and surprised me. You really nailed the comment that you say that unexpected surprises can be found in space.
I think it's a good work, with good vocal performance and the sound of the metal guitars is very well done.
As a comment, there are moments with a too long reverb tail.
becsei_gyorgy – Timeless Space
As always, a very good work. Good voices and very good all the instruments you put behind it.
I love the sound of the 80s and you nailed it very well. Good lyrics.
Good mix.
I couldn't tell you things to improve.
BenjiRage - Overworld
What a great song with good use of the voices. The man from Synth V should sponsor this challenge

I wouldn't know what to say to improve either, everything seems very good to me.
Koekepan - AstheAirRunsOut
I like the idea that you draw with these experimental sounds throughout your song. Very interesting song because it is very original. I like all the details you give in the description of the song entry.
I choose your song with my eyes closed and I find the development it has great.
Perhaps, as an improvement or comment, I would say that the sound of the bell (electric piano I suppose) is a little too hard, too close, too prominent. But it is just a personal opinion.
VanillaPuff – PurpleWorld
Different song. Good bass that gives the song rhythm. Good play with the sounds of the synthesizers that fluctuate here and there. It has just the right length to make the song interesting without getting tiring.
Good mix and with good details in terms of sound effects.
ThomC – Out of Space
What beauty. What magic your song has. I'm surprised because your song has reached my heart.
I really like the piano, the voice that is there almost imperceptibly, the strings. What sensitivity with which your song is developed. I take my hat off to you.
PonySho - Space
Good song. Good guitars and good vocal performance.
Too bad you had to leave because your work was very good.
As a comment I would say that I find the lead vocals and guitars too dry. Maybe a little more reverb would improve things even more.
DavidB - The Probe
Good presentation. I really like the initial sound environment. Good job of creating sound layers with a good mix. Reminds me of current works by Jean-Michel Jarre.
(translated with google, sorry for the imperfections that the translation may contain)
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC088 December 2024 - Voting until 03-JAN-2024 23:59 UTC+1/CET
Many great songs this month again. Thank you mr Fox for organizing this SWC!
My personal reflections this month:
My feedback:
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My personal reflections this month:
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- Mister Fox
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SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC088 December 2024 - Voting until 03-JAN-2024 23:59 UTC+1/CET
We're in the final 24 hours to submit your feedback and cast your vote.
As of this moment, 3 participant is missing (@becsei_gyorgy, @Elcubano, @ThomC). Please get that sorted out today.
Please check post #055 regarding the feedback and voting mechanic. Giving feedback is mandatory (the only criteria to become disqualified). Please don't let yourself be put at a disadvantage by not participating (fully). The Songwriting Competition lives from the given feedback towards each other. Don't just "collect" and then move on - this is unfair to all other participants.
Outside feedback is welcome, of course.
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Re: SONGWRITING COMPETITION - SWC088 December 2024 - Voting until 03-JAN-2024 23:59 UTC+1/CET
Happy new year to all!
Overall, it was good to see a very diverse range of compositions in the style of the theme, each a very worthwhile production in its own right.
I have written down my observations that I (as a complete amateur user ) might change. Most of them reflect rather my own taste, which does not necessarily agree with others, or detract from the musical value of the production.
Here are my feedbacks:
TOP 5:
My experiences:
The difficulty I had this month was that I usually start from the music and write the lyrics afterwards, but this time I started the other way round. I built the song around the lyrics, which is a much more difficult task for me.
As I have no experience in vocal stuff, I have difficulty in figuring out the right vocal chain, the amount of de-essing (and using it at all), getting the vocal right for the song. And using synthV is still an adventure for me.
Overall, it was good to see a very diverse range of compositions in the style of the theme, each a very worthwhile production in its own right.
I have written down my observations that I (as a complete amateur user ) might change. Most of them reflect rather my own taste, which does not necessarily agree with others, or detract from the musical value of the production.
Here are my feedbacks:
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The difficulty I had this month was that I usually start from the music and write the lyrics afterwards, but this time I started the other way round. I built the song around the lyrics, which is a much more difficult task for me.
As I have no experience in vocal stuff, I have difficulty in figuring out the right vocal chain, the amount of de-essing (and using it at all), getting the vocal right for the song. And using synthV is still an adventure for me.